I am unavailable Sundays. Besides church in the morning, Sunday is designated "family time." Don't blame me. It's a leftover from my Midwestern heritage, I think. ;)
Later on Saturdays sounds great. Lenny has voiced his strong support... I believe the quote was "I'd be so happy!" I am, in fact, working this Saturday from 10-4. If anyone wants to pick me up from Arden Fair Mall around then, I would scarcely object.
Adrienne, I loved your D&D adventure. I have one recommendation about your ST/GM/DM-ing style (we should just pick an abbreviation...): avoid using the phrase "going to" when describing actions. Makes it sound like what you're describing is about to happen. Instead, I would suggest using the present tense. Much more energy involved. Case in point:
1) "He's going to quack and hit you in the head with the mallet."
2) "He quacks and hits you in the head with the mallet."
Whammo.
Later on Saturdays sounds great. Lenny has voiced his strong support... I believe the quote was "I'd be so happy!" I am, in fact, working this Saturday from 10-4. If anyone wants to pick me up from Arden Fair Mall around then, I would scarcely object.
Adrienne, I loved your D&D adventure. I have one recommendation about your ST/GM/DM-ing style (we should just pick an abbreviation...): avoid using the phrase "going to" when describing actions. Makes it sound like what you're describing is about to happen. Instead, I would suggest using the present tense. Much more energy involved. Case in point:
1) "He's going to quack and hit you in the head with the mallet."
2) "He quacks and hits you in the head with the mallet."
Whammo.
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